Wednesday 15 March 2017

Clay bird shooting


On Sunday I went clay bird shooting. First I got the clay bird shooter ready. Then I put the clay’s in the clay bird shooter. Next I got ready then I shot the first clay. I was happy then I reloaded and got ready. Then I missed the clay. Then I whent to go and get the clay`s. I picked up 10 clay’s. And then put the clay’s in the clay bird shooter. And got ready then bang.! I Hit the clay right in the middle of the clay. I was soooo happy. But I had to go back home. And have lunch. I had a sausage in beard then I got on the motorbike. And went down the back paddock I went really fast. I zig zagged through the hay ballies. I was sacred  then I got to the end of the paddock I was happy but I had to turn around and go back down the paddock. I was sacred. Then I had to go past the irrigator I was sacred. I was lucky to get past it. Then I had to put the motorbike away inside the shed. And have tea and go to bed. Day two I woke up and got ready to do sume clay bird shooting. I rang up Grandad and asked Grandad if I could go clay bird shooting. And he said yes and then I started to go over to him. And get ready to clay bird shooting. First I got the clay bird shooter ready. And put some clay`s in the clay bird shooter. It was ready to fire I got ready to shoot bang! I hit the clay rite in the middle of the clay. I was happy then I had to go and get some of the clay`s. I just wanted to keep on shooting some clay`s. And not stop shooting. But I had to go back home. And go to bed and have tea. But I did not want to go to bed. Because I was not tired so I sated up and went outside. And played outside with izzy. And spied on Mum and Dad. Then I got spotted and I had to go back to bed. And I just sat there and then got tired and went to sleep. In the morning I got up and got my breakfast. And went outside with my bow. Loaded Up the bow and got ready to go hunt and then I saw a bunny and I shot the bunny and I mist the bunny. I was anger because I did not get the bunny. Then I saw anere bunny I loaded up the bow and shot at the bunny I got the bunny and started to running to the bunny it was dead I was so happy that I got the bunny. Then I went and got Dad he was happy to that I got the bunny. Then I shooed it to Mum she was happy then I went to Ethan he was happy then I went to Logan he was happy. But I had to put it in the boyler. Then I was sad that I had to put it in the boyler then I went back home and had tea and went to bed. The end.

4 comments:

  1. Dear Rohan

    Great job Rohan. How many words did you write? I bet a lots! I liked how you made the words bigger when the gun shot. Please let me know how many words are in your story.

    Sammy

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  2. Rohan you have used "first", "next" and "then" really well. You have also included your feelings. Don't forget to check your spelling; you had a sausage in a beard?!

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  3. Hi Rohan.
    I like the way you made a big story.
    Next time make the words bigger.
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